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Thursday, December 16, 2010

Hearts Love
By:Claude Jannestil

 My name is Ricardo Spade and am looking for my long lost `love ,well  to tell you the truth i have not found my love ,i don’t even have a love to find so just know am on a love journey.
  So let the story begin of Ricardo Spade on a love journey.

The story begins as Ricardo wakes up,and he fell off his bed . Well you in love story how character hit their head on something and they automatic fall in love well this was the total opposite.when he  got up he suddenly had a urge to hate ever body .Oh and just to let you know this does not happen in Once upon a time ago , this happen in the city of 2010 , late February. The love season,the month of Valentine day, and Ricardo does not even has a girlfriend .

Ricardo is a wealthy man .He is a stock broker and a really good one , but today was different day for Ricardo ,he didn’t like anyone at work today and people thought that was strange cause usual he liked every body .So today a new worker was coming to work ,AND WHAT DO YOU KNOW.Its a women named  Kate ,she was a pretty ,brown hair, hazel eyes ,Latino women , Ricardo spent ever minute looking at her until she look at him and said “I am a scholar , hard working ,Latino women and please for your sake take a picture it will last longer .”

   When Ricardo heard that he went from hating to loving , but before he can say anything she already walked into the elevator  and down to the first floor .Ricardo was drooling with his mouth wide open floating in love .But you know Ricardo left work that day part cause he was in love and the other part cause he had a headache and you know why if you read the beginning .But the next day Ricardo saw Kate , he had to make his move .Side note:Ricardo does not know how to talk to girls .Now back to the story.
     
Ricardo went to Kate and said, well he did type good , he just ask her if she wanted to get some coffee .Spuriously she said yes .Kate thought Ricardo was Handsome ,next thing you know they were laughing it up in Starbucks  then one thing lead to another and thr going on date after date and then it happen after a couple of cups of wine .Its happen ,yeah yeah everybody know what talking about ,yes they had the thing ,oh well ya get it right.Three years later Ricardo and Kate are married with twins both boys , Aidan and Jeremiah.
To BE Continued......

Thursday, November 18, 2010

  Samuel



In this story Samuel it talks about how these boys are playing on a train and Samuel dies because  he was being feeble minded. This story was a good short story because it show how from being stupid on the train you can died for example Samuel and his friend was jumping and moving side to side on   




The theme of this story is that Samuel died because he was playing around on a train which is something serious a train goes over 80 miles so u must expect something to happen. but when he died his mom was really depressed. She cry all moring and moan all night and she had another baby and other kid but she did not fell as they were the same as Samuel and i feel as that is so  sad that Samuel died but it was also dumb  of what he did. Samuel i think was a good kid but he was following the wrong crew. But I think this will be a good story for other kids to read.the train. Some lady warn them to get from the middle of the train and get in the train cart before they get hurt.     


    Also in the story i felt that Samuel and his friend knew what they were doing and is Samuel was smart enough he would of thought about what he was doing and he would not follow his friends and since he wanted to be funny and try to fall on his friend when somebody pulled the emergency brake he paid the price and slammed on the train track and the train ran over him and he died .In the story the main idea was a boy named Samuel was playing around the train and he served the consequences  he got for playing on the train.

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